Mentor marks

These are comment marks that Hunter uses to tell a client the type of problem in the text, i.e. what needs repairing.

agr mistake with subject-verb agreement
awk A phrase or sentence is awkward (awkward = not smooth)
cas This language is casual, not formal.
comb Combine sentences.
conj This is a conjunction (don’t start a sentence with it).
gr grammar mistake
non-std this phrasing is not standard
par mistake with parallel structure
red redundant (some information has been repeated,

e.g. The temperature was also recorded as well.

ref pronoun reference problem (what is the reference? is it correct form?)
rep repetitive
rephr Rephrase this.
run-on This is a run-on sentence; it’s too long to be readable.
sp spelling mistake
S-V The subject and verb in a sentence do not agree in some way.
tense You have used the wrong verb tense (past/present/future)

e.g. Yesterday I am going to Tokushima.

vag This phrasing is vague or ambiguous.
voice Change from the passive voice to active voice, or vice versa.

e.g. The ball was hit by the batter. (‘voice’ means change to “The batter hit the ball.”)

windy This  writing is run-on, it could and should be much shorter.
word Find a better word for your meaning.
 <triangle> Add something here (often an article).
  verb Add a verb here.
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